Monday, 11 June 2007
I showed my roughcut at the crit and once again came away feeling pretty down about it all. People found it unclear that she was having a mugshot taken at the end - I thought this was a bit unfair as I haven't actually put the texture on the board yet so obviously you can't tell what it is. However, other comments were made about the fact that it's not clear why she's been arrested which I think is a totally valid point. I need to come up with a way of making the shot of her at the club and the final mugshot connected in some way. Vicky came up with a great idea about having a headline on the front of the magazine she's reading saying "Isabel Arrested!" which I like. Also, having her actually thumping a photographer could work.